One more chance? asked he delighted
And i said no, i could not fight it
In my grave i listen and cry
Of the song he sings with every lie.

sing..sing...it'll be okay.
sweet boy sing..it'll be okay.
^^^^
i absolutely loved the ending. the whole poem was great throughout. i don't think you could've put it any better. i havent really commented on anyone's poems lately, but i just couldn't let this one pass. i adore it. take care.

-Liz =]