Tamed life

by ninjamonkey   May 12, 2008


To train till death
to live life
is this what iam destianed to do
am i alive or is this just a dream
to wake another day
from this nightmarrish hell

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  • 16 years ago

    by Angel Demetrice

    I actully liek this one it might be short but very moving, youve inpressed me very good
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Hatori

    Wow O.O you show a lot of meaning in this poem, and I can really understand what you're writing about ^^

    The only to improve on is your flow. Maybe try to keep the lines similar lengths to make it more aesthetically pleasing and add a distinct flow to you words. It'll really help in the long run ^^
    4/5

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    Hatori

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