Sweet scent, sweet sensation

by Diana Barahona   May 12, 2008


Sweet scent, sweet sensation;
there you are across the grounds cement,
here at the subway station.

sitting down, breathing air,
i am here and you are there.
the smile on my face is everywhere,
here at the subway station.

you look down, i look up;
you feel you hair, which i dream to touch.
you took towards me, i have no luck
here at the subway station.

long blonde sleek hair, 6 feet tall.
bright blue eyes that would me me fall.
right there you just got 'bout it all
hear at the subway station.
nice light tan, skinny, yes you are
with looks way past far.
beautiful and handsome,
but do you want me as i want you?
for you look lonesome and i...
to tell you the truth,
i don't know how i am, who i should be.
can you maybe come and help me.
here this very day at the subway station.

i am on earth, you are in heaven.
i can only dream and smell you sweet scented sensation.
for on eleven eleven i will wish for it all,
here at the subway station

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    I love the wording,
    The flow is good, but could use just a little amount of work

  • 16 years ago

    by Love vs Fate

    Beautiful well written poem. A good message lies within this poem. A message full of beauty and passion. I rate this one poem much higher then a normal 5/5 but sadly on this site it must be a 5/5.

    Keep it up kiddo, Not a bad poem, Very good I must say.