To good to be true

by Colby   May 12, 2008


Should of told you from the start
Cant stand you and I apart
I want to hold you close to me
And show you everything there is to see,

So please accept the fact
That I love you and thats that
And should I walk away from you
your eyes wouldnt be seeing anything true,

Because when I look into those eyes
I start to feel those butterflies
Your just so amazing and all
Put your arms out your gonna have to catch my fall,

Ive only seen people like you in dreams
Your to good to be true it seems
I could give you the world
If the key to your heart I would hold.

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  • 16 years ago

    by ImWaiting4Him

    I loved this and it was great if i were to rate you id give you a 6/5

  • 16 years ago

    by abullettotheheart

    You should tell her
    the way she makes you feel
    fear holds us back from so many things
    push your self and great things can happen
    but the worset of things can happen too
    but rather regret the things you didnt do when you had the chance than regret the things you did do! atleast you will know and we are all so young the are plenty of people just like us wondering when that day will come when they love us to.
    and you cant walk in a room inless that person looks at you or atleast notices you.
    that person whos smile shines your hole life
    and that persons whos eyes bring happness to your heart that person you always end up seeing in a grounded area you always se them in the cracks of people as they walk by and that person is looking at you as though you are the most important person in the world but they never walk up to you do they thus causing a mental break down pain strikes the heart unexpected and we fill as though we shall die no do not give up shine on follow your dreams colby keep writing and exceed at ever thing you do
    WHAT WE ARE IS GODS GIFT TO US.
    WHAAT WE BECOME IS OUR GIFT TO GOD...
    im sorry this was so long
    i hope you smiled at least twice while reading this
    love Brandi
    :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Dying Beautifully

    Really good glad to have read it.. I like the flow and the rhyming scheme.. Great job keep writting.

    Beck

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