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End the parenthesis and if you're going to end when punctuation on these parenthesized ending sentences do so to the rest as well.

The last stanza the spacing is off a bit again.

Other than that I really enjoyed this poem. :) It was very unique. Five out of five.

What a different write but wonderfully done. The message was one not many men feel. great poem with another sad and bittersweet message