Comments : Having a hole for a heart.....

  • 16 years ago

    by VYXSIN

    I liked the fact the the poem was very personal, and the language was fine for the way you were writing. I wasnt to sure about the ending though, maybe you could work on extending it a little bit. other than that good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by lonelydreamer

    Very nice, i loved the way you wrote it all. i can really relate to it and is exactly how i feel. i don't think i'm a people person either but you are never alone. great poem