I liked it though I am wondering why you have all the "Ha"s in this?

Yeh i agree with Violent Kiss. Excellent work but i dont understand the 'Ha's"... keep it up. 5/5

I think i do understand the "ha" i dont' know. you are laughing of what u feel i think idk. but very well writen. the words u choice were perfect. the flow was nice. Great job. Keep it up!

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

5/5