Wasted my time

by XxxBeenThereRockedThatxxX   May 12, 2008


I cant just give up.....
I'm not gonna throw away everything I've been working toward....
A whole year...turned into nothing.....
I've wasted my time haven't I?
Well thats just great....
Fantastic to know ....
The tears weren't worth it
I suppose....
Not enough to convince you that I REALLY do love you...
But I guess that's what I get for chasing after something that just wasn't meant to be.....

-Broken

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  • 16 years ago

    by xX the left behind Xx

    It's totally awesome..mainly because i can relate to it..been through the same thing way too often..loved it. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Love is a Beautiful Thing

    Excellent it awesome i love it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by forevertobeart

    Awh, this is kind of sad. just know that if you are truly meant to be with someone then you guys will be together. i don't believe in wasting your time on love. it only makes you stronger for your next relationship that just could be the one. nice write.

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    I know what you mean, love is tough nice poem short and sweet

  • 16 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    Your punctuation needs some work. I personally find the whole "...." thing to be kind of annoying when used in excess. Also the whole poem just didn't really work for me. Word choice was weak and I feel that you could use some stronger words to make the poem more powerful.

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