This is beautiful I take that u r a published writer I would so love to be published how to u get published

First, thanks for commenting on my poems.
Second, This poem is wonderful, thanks for showing it to me.
It gave me chills.

The nature of the beast, as I now understand,
For DESIRE was once his name!
I was blindly walking , hand in hand!
With this beast, CONSUMPTION, that once was tame!

---this is my favorite part. "for desire was once his name"
Truely wonderful.
Great great great great poem :)

Jim i'm so happy that you with the help of our Lord got to tame your beast i know it can be a hard struggle.a lovely poem that i enjoyed reading.

Grant

It is a demon and it will:

"Until it turned to feast within,
No longer able to supply
My very existence, to feed its sin,
For one of us , will surely die!"

This is an excellent example of an addiction of any kind. It will control our lives until we are forced to choose between living or dying, in order to defeat the monster of addiction. Thank God we both chose to live.