Comments : Innocence (part 1)

  • 16 years ago

    by xxxBrokenHeartxxx

    Really good poem
    I can relate.
    I went through almost the same thing except it was with my stepbrother..
    Keep writing.5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Fear2love

    Unbelieveable......
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    ***take care***

  • 16 years ago

    by Strange and Beautiful

    This was amazing...
    I could visualize everything.
    The image was so clear.
    This almost made me cry.
    This piece is perfect! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Mikaela DLC

    This poem is just so remarkable.

    i'm speechless of the thought of how explicitly vivid you made the poem to be.

    nice job!!!

    :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Shay

    Ok... you told me to read the new ones so when i opened the new one it said to read this one... sorrry but Damn!!! this was amazing and horrifying at the same time... Like, i'm angry right now... its horrible that this happens, absolutely horrible. I don't even feel right saying good job, because the subject matter is so sad, and messed up.
    but once again u really did a good job on this one......

  • 14 years ago

    by dontlookpassmytears

    Nice job! this is a really good poem. I connected even though I havent exxperinced nothing like this.