Comments : Waiting

  • 16 years ago

    by H E Losey

    Again a very nice write. I would drop "Dearest' down to its own line but....
    Just an opinion.

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    This was a marvellous short n sweet wonder..

    U hav shown here in very little words how one can carve magical poems..

    Gr8 one..

    keep it up..

    Best wishz... Karan

  • 16 years ago

    by kate

    Really liked this one great piece.very talented