Hopeless Addiction (557)

by NinjaGirl   May 13, 2008


Hopeless Addiction

He's my hopeless addiction
Drowning out my other thoughts
He's got me doin' laps around him
He's got me playin' sports.

He's my hopeless addiction
Playin' with my mind
He's got my tongue all tied up
He's got my brain all fried.

He's my hopeless addiction
With his laugh and smile
He's my hopeless addiction
Making my life worthwhile.

He's my hopeless addiction
He's all I can ever think of
He's my hopeless addiction
The one that I love.

He's my hopeless addiction
But he never notices me
He's my hopeless addiction
As sweet as can be.

~Dedicated to: Daimon, my Hopeless Addiction~

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  • 16 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    Nice flow n_n very cute in my opinion
    keep writing this was good

  • 16 years ago

    by Hidden1

    This sounds like a crush and I love it a whole lot. I often wonder if men see us as their addiction. What sucks is that he doens't know it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemonbread

    I agree with Dante, you are a very skilled goet hehe. This poem shows how much your talent as grown.
    5/5

    Cheers xo

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Addiction... A lovely theme around which the whole poem plot revolves.. liked it..

    keep it up,

    best wishz.. karan

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Well... this is very interesting poem. It's nicely written. Enjoyable...

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