Thou Soul

by Andy   May 13, 2008


You were the one who used to put that smile upon my face,
You were the one who used to make my life worth living,
You were the one I loved..

Yet you have lost your love for me,
All for the reason of having no reason..

I am all alone..
I am giving up..
I am running out of time..

My restless heart is in agony,
I feel alike man without a shadow,
Alike a man with a heart that screams from inside..

I shed a thousand tears drowned in blood in a sacrifice for your return..
Yet you do not return and my body grows weak,
My eyesight becomes blurred..

Collapsing into the pool of blood shed tears,
My body becomes paralyzed,
The lights turn to black..

Taking my last breath,
I repeat my last words..

Do not pray for thou soul,
For thou soul is free..

And only my soulless body shall remain.

Copyright (c) of Andrew Johnston 2008-05-13

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  • 16 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Nice poem.. i realli like it.. nice work

  • 16 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    Amazing...wonderful u have done yet another great poem...i would love to wrrite with such feeling as you do
    keep up the great work!!
    never stop writing
    tk care
    bree

    plz read and comment on some of my poems...
    tk caare
    bree

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Wow ! amazing, captivating, and wonderful poem...well written & beautifully penned 5/5 keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Too many I's and you's...

    ^My restless heart is in agony,
    I feel alike man with no shadow,
    Alike a man with a heart that screams from inside..^

    There is no need for the punctuation. and when you say alike that is not proper grammar. I think you mean like and in that case you should never use like in a poem rather use as.

    You had emotion, you just did not put it together well. Not deserving of the front page but you get an e for effort.

  • 16 years ago

    by shadow

    This is really good...you touched me....keep writing great poetry

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