by zenith66 May 13, 2008
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
I trod beneath a carpet black, |
This poem is filled with remarkable beauty and your descriptions took me to completely different world. I could clearly imagine every stanza as it unfolded. I like your choice of words and I think that you created good rhythm and flow from the beginning to the end. This is very beautiful nature piece, vivid and captivating. You just have to edit the poem because you have one copy/paste mistake in the last line- "Of winters moon who see�s it all�" but other than that this is truly great. |