That's when my last tear fell

by Janalicious14   May 13, 2008


When heavens touched the earth
and the golden sun shall set
and the sky shall darken
that's when my last tear fell

When time begin to stop
and the radiant moon turns red
and the stars stop on shining
that's when my last tear fell

When gods abate life
happiness abdicate
everything insane
that's when my last tear fell

When you realized I was gone
never coming back
be afraid of this day
the day my last tear fell

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  • 14 years ago

    by Chicken Soup

    Incredible!! I guess you don't cry much ^.^

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    You maintain a graceful flow and created a not so powerful piece but a poem that can touch a reader's heart. simple but beautiful..

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Beautiful ,i love the way you writee it like a questions and end with answers,flow was good and you got talent well done 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a masterpiece
    I love your metaphors ,your chioce of words and format

  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Voice and Tender Heart

    Wow....another emotional piece by you! I am also in love with this one. It is such excellent work. I will continue to read your pieces.

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