Wow....another emotional piece by you! I am also in love with this one. It is such excellent work. I will continue to read your pieces.

This is a masterpiece
I love your metaphors ,your chioce of words and format

Beautiful ,i love the way you writee it like a questions and end with answers,flow was good and you got talent well done 5/5

You maintain a graceful flow and created a not so powerful piece but a poem that can touch a reader's heart. simple but beautiful..

Incredible!! I guess you don't cry much ^.^