Uno

by Ares   May 13, 2008


I'm lost in a world,
where perfection is everything,
where perfection is law - more like a religion.
I'm lost in a world of something greater than myself,
but greater, doesn't have to be for the better.

it's just an idea that I have, an idea of what I should be like, god knows I've tried putting myself to the test. But somehow I always come short.

I'm reaching for the stars in my own universe,
where I am God and I am everything.
why am I constantly failing myself?

shouldn't I be the one to always support me?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Good work xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    This is a very good poem, good imagery, good feel, I feel like I really get it, based on what you said. URGS, I always wish I can help people but can't :( all I can say is that everything changes, that's the way of the world. Things'ill get better. Objectively, this poem is really quite good. I really like it!