Comments : This house is not a home

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Ah sounds so familiar
    my house is the same way

    great job expressing your emotions!
    5/5 <33

  • 16 years ago

    by BrOkEn HeArT

    Oh girl you no im all ways here for you! call me anytime! and i new you were a great writer from the start! love ya like me sister
    with all my heart
    ~*~ BrokenSmile~*~
    aka Teane

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexis

    Amazing...
    I dont know what else to say.
    I am so sorry that you have to go through something like this.
    My mom was an alcoholic too, and almost killed me twice :[
    Be careful...
    chemicals make people do stupid things.
    Again, I am very sorry.. if you ever need to talk, I'm here.
    Amazing poem, I can sense your emotion and how frustrated and maybe even scared you are.
    Awesome job, keep it up.
    5/5.
    :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Kathy Worden

    Its like looking in a mirror...almost. Let the writing continue to be your outlet, and you will one day be in the driver's seat. dont let this reality be your forever-dont forget to trust-someone will be there, and you will have much happier things to write about! I walked your path once...and am a happy 40 something drug/alcohol free happy married mom!

  • 16 years ago

    by bleedingximperfection

    Great job (:
    I like this poem, alott..
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    Again another great poem. Very sad though.
    Just try and remember nothing is your fault. Your childhood may not be great but hopefully your family life when your old enough will be happier. Stay strong girl keep writing down your feelings you are very good at expressing your emotions which is a good thing. If you ever want to talk message me.xxxxxxgreat poem girl....

  • 16 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Ummmmmm... what can i say other then WOW. it was.... just amazing. but it sucks when your home becomes just somewhwere you live with people who are messed up. i know the feeling. but im done with that now!! hope it gets better!! 5/5 great amazing wonderful lovly sad deep job!!! ~KM~

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    This is very sad. It's full of real emotion and sometimes these reads are the best but you my dear are a good writer as you have something special and unique.

    Take care, Em