Amazing work, your language use is very skilled and professional. making this an excellent poem to read well done x very impressed x

"This is my heart and soul,me; laid out in white and black,
with open wounded wrists and a stab wound in the back.
Metaphorically speaking, your just another fish the sea,
even tho your gone now, theres always another one for me."

Wicked stanza :D

"you were the stone that i needed to help with my life,
you give me love and caring, for a trade with my knife.
[i didn't think you'd stick it between my shoulder blades.]"

Love that bit :|
I can totally relate to this. Someone comes along and lifts you up, only to turn their back on you making the probems yo had before thye came hurt 10 times more.

Your vocab is like 10 x better than mine. using different words and what not.

Something i did pick up on though
"[...& we never seen it coming at all]"
saw not seen.

Its not proper english.