Comments : Herheartscreamshermindbelievesshewakesw/cutsshediesw/olovetheend

  • 16 years ago

    by Valerie

    An ok poem, even though title is longer then the poem itself...

  • 16 years ago

    by Taciturn

    It's great! I love your use of capital letters - very effective :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Robbiez EMO Heart and Soul

    I know comment my own poem right, the title became a poem in itself, fyi...kk

  • 16 years ago

    by Splashley

    Aww...i loved that poem like munches and bunches!! haha...it was outstanding! i love ur style!!
    totally 5/5
    great job!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    Love the title and the poem

    keep up the great work

    5/5