by Mr. Darcy May 13, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
Fear, disgust, repulsion, all this and more etched within and upon my recoiling face. If my features had the ability to leave my skull, they would flee, like a thief in the night, being pursued by a pack of flesh hungry, salivating dogs. *Arrrggh* |
by WaitAutumn
Awsome poem |
Wow. This was outstanding. Very interesting. Filled with emotions. Extremely amazing vocabulary. Very unique. I'll give it a 5. I truely thought it was amazing! Keep writing. You've got talent! 5/5 |
This was awesome |
by Sarah
O wow! this poem is outstanding! I love the ending, it was too ironic. Yet so good, Keep writing! |
I think this poem is one of the best I've read so far from your writing. It has a wonderful ending, twisting in a sort of evil tone yet once the ending comes you see the humor. Descriptions were beautiful! 5/5! |