Wow word's can not express how that was great. wow that was awesome. i loved it.

Amazing poem!
great use of descriptive words ++ has a great ending!
6/5 haha :)

I think this poem is one of the best I've read so far from your writing. It has a wonderful ending, twisting in a sort of evil tone yet once the ending comes you see the humor. Descriptions were beautiful! 5/5!

O wow! this poem is outstanding! I love the ending, it was too ironic. Yet so good, Keep writing!

[5.5]

Sarah

This was awesome
you have a real way to make the reader be able to visualise everythign you were thinking when you wrote this.
i love it!!
<3 xox

Wow. This was outstanding. Very interesting. Filled with emotions. Extremely amazing vocabulary. Very unique. I'll give it a 5. I truely thought it was amazing! Keep writing. You've got talent! 5/5

Awsome poem
the words choosen, the way you put them together
really lets the reader just picture it all
5/5!