It's no poppy field

by Melissa   May 13, 2008


Love is not
for the weak-hearted
who fall
at the slightest gust of charm

no, it is not a fairy-tale
containing nothing but words
of white horses
and happy endings

Sometimes, love wears thorns
and cleverly hides itself
behind the gesture of a rose
or worse yet
a man with no flowers at all

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  • 12 years ago

    by Lyn

    I love the final five lines and read them with satisfacion several times. Brilliant!!

  • 13 years ago

    by yogi73

    Ha!! well written and very clever...

  • 13 years ago

    by Dave

    Very good, I liked it alot

  • 16 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    My friend, you are masterful in your writing and use of language. I have missed your writing tremendously. Because of my health and my work schedule I have not read much lately but it is nice to see you are still able to put an angels touch to the words you write.

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    A cleverly written piece. Now this is the kind of poem I like to see on the boards!

    Thought provoking and the flow was good. Excellent job!