Now that is a 5.5poem for sure. excellently worded and right from the heart which is felt all the way from start to finish, you used very good words to express these feelings and it worked very well.

your flow that is in this poem gave it a very good enjoyable ryhme.

sad topic but it made a lovely poem, wel done for writing this and keep writing xx

A very sad poem Michelle.
i appreciate it.
i can't say i understand what you feel coz it never happened to me.but just reading your poem makes me realize how hard it is to recover when a loved one died. in your poem you expressed the feelings you must express.
and i really like it!

don't worry, God promised that there will be resurrection.

"Do not marvel at this, because the hour is coming in which all those in the memorial tombs will hear his voice and come out, those who did good things to a resurrection of life, those who practiced vile things to a resurrection of judgment." John 5:28-29

i'm one of Jehovah's Witnesses, and i believe that you also have your own religion.but one things for sure, that we both believe in Jesus.
that's why, i would be glad to explain to you, how God will make resurection possible.

well have a nice day Michelle! take care!
continue writing!

regards,
Jayc

5 out of 5 for this poem for sure! it's a sad poem but it really did sound and read v well! keep it up i think your an amazing writer Cx