Mirror Images

by HidinVictim   May 13, 2008


She's looking in the mirror
Her eye's so full of fear,
Notice; there's no more tears.

She'll never forget,
Your the memories she
regrets.

Her willpower has left,
No will to win
This game she plays,
Will be her end.

She's looking in the mirror
Her eye's so full of fear,
Notice; there's no more tears.

She wants someone to care,
Explain why life's not fair
Someone to take her knife,
Hold her tight at night.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I can relate to this, the last stanza was spot on. The wording was powerful, yet simple enough and you did a fantastic job on the emotion. Thumbs up.
    Tara

  • 16 years ago

    by Wereallbladesarntwe

    Powerful emotions run through this poem, well done, love it, xp

  • 16 years ago

    by Just Jessy

    That poem is beautifal. Brilliantly written. I love it:) Keep writing x 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    I feel like that sometime...and this poem does a very good job at expressing emotions

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    I feel like that sometime...and this poem does a very good job at expressing emotions

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