F.A.M.I.L.Y.
by Robert Anthony May 13, 2008
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16 years ago
CAN'T BELIEVE I NEVER SEEN THIS ONE...
DUDE, YOUR APART OF THEM, YOU HAVE TO GET USED TO THAT FACT, NO MATTER HOW MUCH PAIN IT CAUSES YOU...
GOOD PIECE THOUGH... -
16 years ago
by H E Losey
Good use of the acrostic style, nice terminology. I'm not sure I would have used "family" in the verbage, perhaps group or clan. And I would perhaps change the "and" for a comma in line 5. As always just an opinion.
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16 years ago
Very powerful poem. I love the way you started every line with the letters in family. Good work!
