Very powerful poem. I love the way you started every line with the letters in family. Good work! |
by H E Losey
Good use of the acrostic style, nice terminology. I'm not sure I would have used "family" in the verbage, perhaps group or clan. And I would perhaps change the "and" for a comma in line 5. As always just an opinion. |
CAN'T BELIEVE I NEVER SEEN THIS ONE... |