Comments : Addiction's talking ((perspective))

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    What can i say, this was utterly amazing fantastic, one of my fav's, you speak so real, and true, good poem

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Weirld but i like weirld you got to read my
    I AM YOUR DISEASE i so relate 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    Hey nice idea!

    - But don't forget to feed me,
    or darling i may eat you alive,
    i, your addicton, can be your best friend,
    just remember, my control is what i use to thrive -
    i loved the end! its really twisted but well written! 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by stacey ohara

    I love this poem my partner is fighting an addiction and we often talk bout hes feeling and he has said to m that even though its been six months since he has taken any drugs a little voice in his head still trys to tempt him back and i think you have captured that beautifully in your peice of writing. you get an excellent from me love