Profound and powerful from the beginning to the end. I think that you managed to convey your message excellently through the poem.
I like the beginning, it is vivid and interesting, filled with greatly described images. The third stanza is my favorite one, I like your descriptions there a lot, also, it is truly deep. The ending stanza is great, too, because it summed up the poem fantastically and it contains an amount of overwhelming emotions and thoughts.

- (bedtime stories eating children)-
&&
-caterpillars crawl beneath your foreheads
and butterflies flutter in your stomach ...
... do they feel?-
^^^
Stunningly brilliant. I love those lines, there is something irresistibly original and powerful about them.

I liked this is was really good...
considering the fact that i feel so awkward right now..stupid chorus.. Never sing in high school you get to wear awesomely awfull outfits