Ohhh that was fantastic, really it was, you done an amazing job with the language use and the flow worked very well and length was just perfect not too long or too short,

you really puit a lot of emotions in it and it makde it very very powerful and strong.

well done keep writing xx

Perfect use of emotion and tragedy you used in penning this piece. I was truly hooked from the beginning and was eager to read more to see what happens next. You truly had me at the edge of my seat. I could feel for this couple because you told this story flawlessly and brought it to life. The ending just hit me like boom and the title used at the end was perfect. Well done and congrats on winning *5/5*