Weak

by Brad Quammen   May 14, 2008


There you are,my only friend
The only one to stick around regardless
No matter what

There you are,the one I hate
I'm disgusted by your looks,
and even your mind

There you are,same as always
You want everything yet do nothing
Your weak

There you are,tempted by an angel
You don't deserve her,
only emptiness

There you are,without a clue
Oblivious about what others see
Forever tortured by your weak mind

There you are,giving up again
Just as you always do,
run you fool...

There you are,once again
standing in front of the mirror,
with no sense of reality,
just her...

There you are,this time thinking
for once,not wanting to be like me
Yet you are

We are one in the same
We share the same thoughts,
cause we ARE one in the same

"I am weak"
Then the trigger clicks...
I am no more

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kapri Jamonda

    GoTtA LuV Di$ !

  • 16 years ago

    by AngelEyez89

    "I am weak"
    Then the trigger clicks...
    I am no more

    amazing! that is so good. envious of your talent

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew

    A strong poem you got here, love the choice of words too. The flow got abit rocky somewhere in the begining but you caught the flow and drove your point home. Nice work give it 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    Gusto ko itong poem. Magandang ung words dita parang inspirational.

  • 16 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    I like the way your writing style is in this poem. Sounds familiar but its original.

    "There you are,giving up again
    Just as you always do,
    run you fool..."

    I like how your talking to this person in the poem, when in the end it actually is yourself.

    "There you are,once again
    standing in front of the mirror,
    with no sense of reality,
    just her..."

    I like this stanza I didnt expect that to be the last line.

    5/5

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