I like the way your writing style is in this poem. Sounds familiar but its original.

"There you are,giving up again
Just as you always do,
run you fool..."

I like how your talking to this person in the poem, when in the end it actually is yourself.

"There you are,once again
standing in front of the mirror,
with no sense of reality,
just her..."

I like this stanza I didnt expect that to be the last line.

5/5

Gusto ko itong poem. Magandang ung words dita parang inspirational.

A strong poem you got here, love the choice of words too. The flow got abit rocky somewhere in the begining but you caught the flow and drove your point home. Nice work give it 4/5

"I am weak"
Then the trigger clicks...
I am no more

amazing! that is so good. envious of your talent

GoTtA LuV Di$ !