A Suicidal Love

by SuicideNotes2Poems   May 14, 2008


A boy who is lost , because she has been found
The love of his life, turned upside down
beautiful feelings, that only end up in cries
A passionate love, will end a boys life

People search a lifetime, to have a love like this
But the cries of this boy, shows his innocence is missed
A suicidal mindset, because she cant be his
Killing himself for her, dreams of doing this

She is perfect for him, he is perfect for her
But to this fact she is blind, already having a lover
He wishes he could treat her good, and tell her "I love you"
And for his feelings to be understood, and for their love to be true

But this will never happen, the boy realizes this
He finally comes to see, that she will never be his
So he will die alone, young and broken hearted
He is now bleeding to death, waiting to be departed

There was a boy who was lost, because she was found
The only love of his life, was turned upside down
There once was beautiful feelings, that ended up in cries
And a passionate love, ended a boys life.

Ricky

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  • 16 years ago

    by 1Mistake

    Well, the poem was good, I really liked it but man, life can suck sometimes...
    =[ I'm sorry.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ahmed Mamdouh

    A good promised poem one cant expect all these sentements out of a very young poet ,but let me please ask is the lover is still adolscent like you?

  • 16 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    This was such a beautiful poem
    because it unraveled a story
    that a lot of young people face in todays times.
    My brother had a friend who committed
    suicide over a girl so I
    could really relate and saw him in this poem.
    over all it was a great write!!
    Loved your words that you used!! 5/5 :)
    ***Take care***

  • 16 years ago

    by Jocelyn

    This is relle good, i like it a lot, it might be my favorite so far

  • 16 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Awww... this is so sad.

    again the emotion is really strong and portrayed beautifully, i can understand the pain and the suffering from reading this, which is what you should get out of every poem.

    the flow was a bit sketchy and times but i dont think it took away from anything so nicely done =]