by Samantha May 14, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Without you in it, |
by AlaSkA
Im not really big on settled rhyme schemes, because some times they take away from the conveyed meaning's due to predictability and lack of useful vocabulary. i do have to say though as the poem progressed i became more comfortable with the read. the last 2 lines are some that will stick with me for a while. to me they are the most impressive. a very well ended work. i like the idea of talking to memories. (: |