The Loser

WOW! that was very.............what's the word for it [[G0OF3Y!!]] But it's cool if it was in the funny section that's why i went to it

I like the subject or topic w/e you wanna call it that you wrote about

L0$3R is a big word around where i hang

But i do think that you could've used more vocabulary, and this being [funny] i think you should made it rhyme

Not all poems rhyme, some of the best poems in the world don't rhyme BUT, a poem like this, with this topic i think could've rhymed. And also think you should've made it more longer {length wise}

I know you said you wrote this in 10 grade but you didn't post when you were in the 10th grade i think you could've looked over it a lil bit

Hey it's still not to late this poem has the potential to be a 5/5 but right now i'd give a 3.5 or 4 that sorta kinda range. :\

This is a interesting poem. It was kind of funny, but it could be better. :] 4/5

I liked the begining nice poem 4/5

Lol wow weird but in that funny way