Children Shouldn't Smoke

by Lindsay   May 14, 2008


Is that a cigarette in your hand?!
Throw it down, on my command!
If you do not see my justice true,
Then you have bad moral value!

((I yelled this out to a 13 year old student at my school, on the spot. After listening to what I said, I decided it rhymed enough to toss into this website. The chick didn't get the hint, though, so I tore the ciggy from her and stepped on it.
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It's a wonder she didn't beat me up.))

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  • 16 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    It was nice. smoking is bad n yet u waste ur own money on it. i like it. very nice of you to do that. n glad u didnt get bet up either.. lol
    love it. nice job...

    take care,
    Frenchy

  • 16 years ago

    by SuicideNotes2Poems

    =]
    its cute. i liked it, and smoaking cigarettes is a waist of life and not to menchin money. i dont know why kids think its cool to smoke them, mabee its the rebal comeing out in them or something. >.<
    but nice small poem, and im proud of you. ; )

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wow how very brave of you
    I liked it
    It was short and simple
    children really shouldnt smoke
    it's horrible
    thanks for mentioning it to someone
    4/5

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