Wow i don't even know what to say
i really loved it.
i rated it too
you write so beautifully
keep it up

my fav part was

A fluttering of the heart
and a dull throbbing ache
every time I realize that
for you and I
there is
no hope.

Dear god
Can you not recognize the devotion
and passion behind these tear bedewed lashes?

Gnawing pain from the lesion
you've carved into my heart

it was so beautiful.
5/5

This poem was really good and I really enjoyed it.=)