I like this well done xx

WOW!! i love it! its so powerful!

Very powerful poem
It is well writen and i like the way the lines are short and in quick sucession (sp?)

Short but very good.Your word choice here was utterly fantastic.Very well written.5/5

-Amber

I like the how these lines were repeated

"and the circumstance, it seems
just a bit delusional. "

and the word choice was great.