Comments : Their Shadows cast on sands beside you, beside me.

  • 16 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    That was bloody brilliant! Truly amazing... I am speechless, so sorry. :( God, I wish I could rate you a 50/50... marvelous! I judge you artistically, bloody marvelous! Wow. 5/5.

    By the way, the title is amazing. :) Very creative. Kudos!

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    This is so unique poem... I read every line it flow perfectly and the meaning... It is absolutely beautiful... For Sanskriti! *raises her juice glass*

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    This is beautiful... simply Beautiful... I got so lost into the poem while reading it... i could visualize the beach... shells .. u and sanskriti... so wonderfully described..

    "Their Shadows cast on sands beside you, beside me"

    The repetition awesome... excellent write..

  • 16 years ago

    by darkest4ever

    Some poems stop you alot ....to read again and again

    you poem is one of them

    really can't say anything ....words can't express it