Comments : Become One

  • 16 years ago

    by Love vs Fate

    Ahh...Good stanza...But I saw a few mistakes.
    Here is the paragraph where they are that I picked up.

    I know that we have spent,
    spent tree <---(I think you meant three) months with each other.
    And I defiantly <-- (defiently) (I believe that's how it's spelled.)know that,

    But bro this poem is AMAZING AS ALWAYS!! NEVER STOP WRITING BRO I LOVE IT!! 5/5