:( This poem is so sad. I am here for you little one. You know I'm willing to take you in as soon as I can. I will be out on my own soon I promise you. I'll let you be free and feel safe instead of having to be hurt and dealing with depression. I want you to be a healthy active girl and I know you have the potential to do that hun. Hang in there I'll be your rescuer some time soon!!
As for the poem I rate it a 5/5 but much much more then a 5 in my heart.

I agree with travis. Harlea, 5/5 no doubt. If there's anything you need come tell me ok? Good no excellent poem.

Wow that is a big load to carry all by your self. did that actually happen to you? i'm so sorry if it did. if u need to talk i'm here for you okay.
my favorite part was
fours years later,
here sits the little girl,
that caused you to take that last sip,
and it is way too much for me to handle,
cause every time i think of you.

it feels like i am dieing inside,
cause i caused you to drink,
and i didnt even take time to think,
and now i cry while writing this,
cause the thought of you is too much for me too handle.

you wrote it so beautifully.
keep it up hun
i give it a five even though i feel it deserves so much more.