Thanks to you

by MERCY is never shown   May 14, 2008


The memories she couldn't deny
the things she'd done
the tears she'd cried
the things she blamed on herself
the harm she'd done to herself
why couldn't you tell her it didn't matter
that she could survive even then
you knew her past and present
and you planned her future
but now thanks to you
she has none
thanks to you it's all over
thanks to you
and what you couldn't say

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  • 16 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    This, too, is a very good piece. A lot of raw emotion I think. And I like that in poets. Pieces that are more of a diamond in the rough instead of a perfectly polished stone set into a ring. It leaves options open to the reader instead of it having one set meaning.
    One piece of advice though...may I suggest you put something like this in either the sad or even love categories. You will get a lot more exposure cause they're visited a lot more often. Hope it helps! :)
    ~Midnight Sun

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