This, too, is a very good piece. A lot of raw emotion I think. And I like that in poets. Pieces that are more of a diamond in the rough instead of a perfectly polished stone set into a ring. It leaves options open to the reader instead of it having one set meaning.
One piece of advice though...may I suggest you put something like this in either the sad or even love categories. You will get a lot more exposure cause they're visited a lot more often. Hope it helps! :)
~Midnight Sun