To me it seems like you have run out of words to say about how much you love a person |
by dandelion
I dont get it..actually..haha |
A mixture of thoughts, When there are a lot of things goin on like topics in mind..... n we have so many words, begin a write n soon feel we have run out of words..... |
by Nix
-Your words are sweet reminders |
Your words are sweet reminders |
by Dan Bloom
The only thing i have to say is that the second stanza when you use cadence is a bit confusing to me. |
by fearose
I think you have an amazing gift to write a poem that may not have a specific meaning or theme but it communicates something different for each and every individual. It's because of this that makes you a great poet. You write for you but it makes it very easy for others to enjoy your work. We are drawn to what we can relate to. This is like wishing for something you once had that ended so sourly to come back in it's full bloom that it once had. Beautiful, I love your work. 5/5 |