That was a good poem.. but i do look toward the future... if u dont then u are bond ito make mistakes that will negatively effect ur future.. like somking.. yeah its fun at the time.. but if u smoke too much then u ca die in the future.. but i completely understood what you were saying. god job kid:)

I liked this poem alot.. It has a clear message on how precious time really is. I like how u made it a reminder to treasure all the moments u have to live each day to its fullest, and not to worry about tomorrows problems. You always have a way with words (well when it comes to poems.) Good Job Kid(hey I had to keep it going) 5/5 always
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Kate~ LSB23

Super sexy man. It has the hott vocals, and deep meaning in it. lol i like it lotz dog. Call 1-900-SHILA. lol

U PERV. AJ ! back off the name calling thats for me to do...

Great write, always look to the future 5/5

Not bad not bad

your servant:
Cincinnatus

Nice poem dude. its flowy and catchy,with meaning in it.

Well, you got your message across quite well. and a beautiful message at that. this was a lovely poem, very pure very open. and quite creative. and i loved the title. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.