Thanks to all for commenting and encouraging me.. I would appreciate every one's comments.. As english is not my mother tounge... i feel a little consious , when i write poems in english.. thanks for correcting me...

sounds like a really nice dream...nice poem also, keep it up girl...LiL One

all i can say is wow...i totally love this...it was amazing and so full of love. AMAZING i love it...you are truely talented...please keep writing