The Day You Took My Breath Away

by Silverflower   May 15, 2008


I sit here, crying on the inside, but not the outside, I really love you, but you just push me away, all those notes where fake.

I thought we where perfect for each other, but now I reconsider, I wasted so much time being stuck on you and loving you.

But because you push me away I get the picture, I'm just a worthless old dog. Just something you can get excited and then let down at the end.

I try to stop this feeling I have for you, but I can't! You are my life and my breath. But sometimes you take my breath away, and just when I'm almost gone, you come back just so I can have a little more breath, just to take it away.. AGAIN!

This isn't fair... I just wanted to say... I love you, but I can't stand loving you because you kill me emotionally. When I need you your there, but just as I get better, you take my breath away. You just leave me hanging and it kills me. Please stop...

I LOVE YOU.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats really well expressed, well done xx