by MARI May 15, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I hate how i love a boy so much and i care so much but this boy drives me crazy and i am truly in love with him. he doesn't like me and he doesn't even noticed me he likes my friend and it truly hurts me to know that he loves my friend and it makes me cry i cant help myself from loving him i wish i could but i cant. i hate how life works for me. the first time i find a guy he doesn't love me he never will and i care for him more then anything in the world.its so hard to forget him since i see him all the time. the hurt he causes me is unexplainable! i hope one day he realizes how much i love him and how much i care but I'm gonna try to move on and just ignore all my love! |
by Aish
Hmmm, i think its interesting how you put it all in one go-no paragraphs and stanzas or anything-but i guess it comes across as a wave of raw emotion-which isnt structured-so that works. |
by PoetryKnight
This poem reminds me of my poem, the girl in school. cause, right now, high school is a drama all by its self. TV does not need to do anything. |
by Deana
This is a very heartfelt poem,It is very hard to feel like we love somebody and that they don't feel the same way, Things change everyday though and someone will come along that will love you with all their heart. Keep expressing your heart in poetry. |