This is a very heartfelt poem,It is very hard to feel like we love somebody and that they don't feel the same way, Things change everyday though and someone will come along that will love you with all their heart. Keep expressing your heart in poetry.

This poem reminds me of my poem, the girl in school. cause, right now, high school is a drama all by its self. TV does not need to do anything.

Hmmm, i think its interesting how you put it all in one go-no paragraphs and stanzas or anything-but i guess it comes across as a wave of raw emotion-which isnt structured-so that works.

It seems like the situation my friend was in not long ago-i have a poem called "cursed" about it. but she's over it now.

I hope everything works out for you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aish
xoxo