Tomatoes refuse to talk

by StandStill   May 15, 2008


Yes, you say it's all yours,
a little knife held by your heart,
is it sharp or dull?
please tell, is it tearing you apart?

Are you reading this poem?
can you hear the bitterness drip?
yes, no, maybe so,
maybe you don't give a rip.

I don't know why I'm worked up
i mean, it IS your life,
i suppose it's because i've shared with you
let you see MY knife

I showed you the things that killed me
that cut me through my veins
but for some reason unbeknownst to me,
you keep hiding your weary pain

So I'll ask again, are you reading?
do you think she's reading it too?
i wonder if you're aware of the fact,
that she and i don't know what to do

**if you read it, ((you know who you are)) comment it. even though i know you won't**

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  • 16 years ago

    by Anastasia Glass

    This was very very good :] I loved the way you used to the senses to bring out the way you felt and the title was definently awesome :] very suitable, good luck!

  • 16 years ago

    by Alex

    =) like it (=

  • 16 years ago

    by BurriedFaceDown

    Gabbs....you are pretty darn strange

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    This is a 5/5
    awsome work

  • 16 years ago

    by kimberley

    This is so so dum

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